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Me being excited about yet another song

Thu Feb 22, 2007, 1:55 PM
I freakin' love this song. Just figured I'd share.

Dispatch:

There was a decorated general with

a heart of gold, that likened him to

all the stories he told

of past battles, won and lost, and

legends of old a seasoned veteran in

his own time


on the battlefield, he gained

respectful fame with many metals

of bravery and stripes to his name

he grew a beard as soon as he could

to cover the scars on his face

and always urged his men on


but on the eve of a great battle

with the infantry in dream

the old general tossed in his sleep

and wrestled with its meaning

he awoke from the night

just to tell what he had seen

and walked slowly out of his tent


all the men held tall with their

chests in the air, with courage in

their blood and a fire in their stare

it was a gray morning and they all

wondered how they would fare

till the old general told them to go home

He Said


I have seen the others

and I have discovered

that this fight is not worth fighting

I have seen their mothers

and I will no other

to follow me where I'm going


Take a shower, shine your shoes

you got no time to lose

you are young men you must be living


Take a shower, shine your shoes

you got no time to lose

you are young men you must be living

go now you are forgiven


but the men stood fast with their

guns on their shoulders not knowing

what to do with the contradicting orders

the general said he would do his own

duty bout would not extend it no further

the men could go as they pleased


not a man moved, their eyes gazed

straight ahead till one by one they

stepped back and not a word was said

and the old general was left with his

own words echoing in his head

he then prepared to fight

He Said



I have seen the others

and I have discovered

that this fight is not worth fighting

I have seen their mothers

and I will no other

to follow me where I'm going


Take a shower, shine your shoes

you got no time to lose

you are young men you must be living


Take a shower, shine your shoes

you got no time to lose

you are young men you must be living

go now you are forgiven


go now you are forgiven

  • Mood: Joy
  • Listening to: She is beautiful - andrew W.K.
  • Playing: FF1!!! Oldschool yo.
  • Eating: Burritos. Mmmmmmm
  • Drinking: Baja Blast!

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  • Current Residence: Delaware!
  • Interests: Backpacking, Canoeing, random outdoorsy stuff.
  • Favourite movie: Boondock Saints, Empire Records, Braveheart, Billy Madison, Finnean's Rainbow
  • Favourite band or musician: The Atari's, KT Tunstall, Barenaked Ladies, Steely Dan, Reel Big Fish, Paulson, Goldfinger
  • Favourite genre of music: It's so hard to pick....
  • Favourite artist: Tommy Emmanuel the best guitar player EVER!!!
  • Favourite poet or writer: Terry Brooks
  • Favourite photographer: Ansel Adams- only one I really know.
  • Operating System: Win2K professional.
  • Shell of choice: Yours
  • Skin of choice: Wicked Designs - Captain Kuro
  • Favourite game: Who stole Ed's pants?
  • Favourite gaming platform: The dining room table.
  • Favourite cartoon character: Marvin the martian
  • Personal Quote: Every second that passes becomes the future that was.
  • Tools of the Trade: Paperclips, chewing gum, and some melted plastic. McGuyver Style.

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Comments


:iconjayenems:
Hi Sam, howya doing :thumbsup: ?

Thank you so much for visiting the gallery & selecting a print, I am deeply honored & shall make it available for you today.

Your poetry is really inspiring & so are the pix , thank you.

Hope you're not offended by my sending the following link for the US:

[link]

:peace:

"Every second that passes will never, ever, return."

:love:

:heart:

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words of peace - global
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:iconharu-shay:
I love your avatar/icon thing! Sam is such a Pimp! That's kinda how you looked after 2 weeks without a razor @Phil. Lol, jk!

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" We could have been killed! Or worse, EXPELLED!"- Hermione Granger, Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone. :floating:
:icontengoken:
yeah that was nice....Bowser kicks more ass.

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You fail at playing Chipanzuff the flagrantly gay ninja!

Do you frog? Our 4th graders do! ~ most random thing in my church I've ever seen.
:iconharu-shay:
Oh, so just when I say I like it you change it? Psh, fine, I see how it is. XD

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" We could have been killed! Or worse, EXPELLED!"- Hermione Granger, Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone. :floating:
:iconkatimari:
Thank you for the fav^^, I appreciate it.

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Oh, let's go back to the start...
:icontturbo:
Nice gallery :gallery:.
Sorry I didn't read your texts, but I liked your pictures, especialy Canyon Flatlands!

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A style of my own
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:iconkatimari:
Thanks for the fav ^.^:hugs:

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Oh, let's go back to the start...
:iconkatimari:
:hug:**

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Oh, let's go back to the start...
:icontengoken:
Don't mention it. It looked really cool. :D

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You fail at playing Chipanzuff the flagrantly gay ninja!

Do you frog? Our 4th graders do! ~ most random thing in my church I've ever seen.

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